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Dead City (part 1)

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Dead City (part 1)

Post  Plastic On Fire on 4th December 2009, 12:38 pm

A sunny Friday in San Francisco. Two days before Christmas. I kiss my wife goodbye as I walk out the door. Once I get to my office building, I’m greeted by a big stack of papers on my desk. Right when I sit down I heard a loud shriek that broke my frightened me Soon after I heard udder chaos in the streets bellow my office building. I looked out the window only to see running and screaming citizens. My only instinct was to turn on the built in radio on my phone and listen to the report.. It was to loud in the office building and I only managed to hear the reporter say “destroy the brain”.

I rushed to the elevator but it was packed already. Taking the stairs was my only way down now. I was on the top floor on a 35 story building. Not to long later I made it to the first floor. As I was walking away a loud shriek rang in my ear. I turned around and saw a disfigured man biting a young woman’s leg. “Help me!” she said. I just ignored her and walked away acting as if this never happened.

The main lobby was like a war. It was crowded by the infected against the immune. Finding a new way out of this building was vital. Maybe the lobby’s bathroom had a window. I had to take this chance. Once I got to the bathroom I had just enough space to fit through the window onto the street.

A little girl was in the middle of the road. “Hey!” I called out to her. Soon enough a first grader was trying to kill me! Fortunately her legs weren’t long enough to catch up to me. Down the road there was an alley with teenagers that had melee weapons. I needed to stay with them in order to survive

Down the alley we saw a parking lot with cars and a lot of zombies also. We needed a distraction. After arguing a little bit a young boy stepped up to the challenge and got all the zombies to follow him. I took the sports car and I thought the teens were going to hop in but that’s not what they were looking for. They wanted the Jeep but little did they know there were two zombies inside. Watching helplessly they were torn to shreds.

Getting to my block was the easy part but getting to my house was hard. Hordes of zombies were every were. My only choice was to climb through the backyards of each house until I got to mine.

Once I was there I saw a note on the refrigerator. “If your reading this, I miss you.” I knew exactly what happened. A loud thud hit the front door. There was also a lot of groans. I knew exactly what those diseased freaks want. My flesh. “I didn’t go this far just to die. And if I do die I’m not going down without a fight. Good bye America. It was a good run.”
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Post  Cry Vengeance on 4th December 2009, 3:31 pm

For a first time post in this section I would say it was pretty good, However it felt rushed, maybe slow down the pace a little and describe things more.

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Re: Dead City (part 1)

Post  Meatshield718 on 4th December 2009, 6:45 pm

Dude, you stole this exact story from a zombie text-based flash game. I can't seem to remember the name or find it though. It was a choose your own adventure game that I played a few months ago. Neutral

So why did you essentially reward and past their story here and call it yours?

Can anyone back me up on this?

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Re: Dead City (part 1)

Post  Cry Vengeance on 4th December 2009, 8:44 pm

-Gasp-

Plagiarism eh?
I'll investigate!

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Re: Dead City (part 1)

Post  BlitherCube on 4th December 2009, 8:59 pm

Oh just like masterofcock did.
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Re: Dead City (part 1)

Post  Slacker Hero on 4th December 2009, 9:49 pm

Meatshield718 wrote:Dude, you stole this exact story from a zombie text-based flash game. I can't seem to remember the name or find it though. It was a choose your own adventure game that I played a few months ago. Neutral

So why did you essentially reward and past their story here and call it yours?

Can anyone back me up on this?

Think I found it.

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/511685

Plagiarized, it seems. With a few changes.
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Re: Dead City (part 1)

Post  Zomando on 5th December 2009, 1:26 pm

Slacker Hero wrote:
Meatshield718 wrote:Dude, you stole this exact story from a zombie text-based flash game. I can't seem to remember the name or find it though. It was a choose your own adventure game that I played a few months ago. Neutral

So why did you essentially reward and past their story here and call it yours?

Can anyone back me up on this?

Think I found it.

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/511685

Plagiarized, it seems. With a few changes.

I found no changes, he completely stole it.
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Re: Dead City (part 1)

Post  Cry Vengeance on 5th December 2009, 3:16 pm

Well Plastic, Plagiarism is illegal and punishable under law so..... Your banned.


G'day.

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Re: Dead City (part 1)

Post  snipdawg on 5th December 2009, 5:59 pm

Cry Vengeance wrote:Well Plastic, Plagiarism is illegal and punishable under law so..... Your banned.


G'day.


OR we could do what we did to airsault .and a suspension
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Re: Dead City (part 1)

Post  GumboNoodle on 5th December 2009, 6:18 pm

[quote="snipdawg"]
Cry Vengeance wrote:Well Plastic, Plagiarism is illegal and punishable under law so..... Your banned.


G'day.[/quote


OR we could do what we did to airsault .and a suspension
OR we could do what we did to masterofkills09 and do nothing
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Re: Dead City (part 1)

Post  Namorg on 5th December 2009, 6:21 pm

or we can AN HERO
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Re: Dead City (part 1)

Post  snipdawg on 5th December 2009, 7:03 pm

what did master do
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Re: Dead City (part 1)

Post  Meatshield718 on 5th December 2009, 9:09 pm

Namorg wrote:or we can AN HERO

Good idea.

Wouldn't it be funny if plastic on fire actually made this flash game though?

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Re: Dead City (part 1)

Post  BlitherCube on 5th December 2009, 9:38 pm

snipdawg wrote:what did master do

Plagiarized a story to try to impress people.
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Re: Dead City (part 1)

Post  krayden8 on 5th December 2009, 9:52 pm

my story was 100% ligit
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