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The First And Last Day...

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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  snake eyez 89 on 16th May 2010, 5:55 am

great story you should make another story they are very exciting and freaky Laughing
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A new Chapter in the Life of the Dead begins...

Post  Qthewinner on 17th May 2010, 3:57 am

Undetermined time at night:
Leaning against the railing of the fishing boat labeled "Sea Bitch", Tom smiles, blood dripping down his face as he finishes chewing the flesh in his mouth... 'This is better than steak' Thinks Tom as he swallows, finally satisfying his stomach. Tom looks around, seeing the body of one of the fisherman he killed, the other he had pulled over the railing and broken his neck... Sadly, that body will go to the fishes, but for now at least, Tom was under control. Looking back, Tom sees a city burning in the distance... Liberty is burning tonight... "That doesn't matter anymore..." Tom says, looking at the mainland, at San Andreas... "Now, to start a new life...
Tom climbs down the deck and he finds the bathroom, going in to check his face.

'Excellent,' Thinks Tom. 'Everything's good... Except for my eyes...'
Tom blinks and his eyes revert to their normal color.
'Oh, well then...'
Washing his face, Tom cleans himself up for his 'moving'... 'There was something else... something more important than my hunger once...' Thinks Tom, looking at his blood covered hands, but the memory is locked behind something in Tom's mind...
Tom goes up to the ship's controls and directs the boat to the mainland, not quite sure how come he knew how to work the boat... "Why the hell can't I remember anything..." Tom asks himself out loud, but shakes the thought from his head.
'That's not important...' Thinks Tom as the boat sails through the moon-lit waters of San Andreas bay. 'Time for some fast food.'
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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  Churros Rock on 4th August 2011, 3:55 am

damn. this was really really well done and well written. great job!
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