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Outbreak, Vladimir Kroskov's story

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Re: Outbreak, Vladimir Kroskov's story

Post  RedrumSalad on 26th July 2010, 5:52 pm

Bladewind23 wrote:
To Be Continued.

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Post  Made in Finland on 26th July 2010, 5:58 pm

RedrumSalad wrote:
Bladewind23 wrote:
To Be Continued.

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Oh, would have you preferred "The End"?
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Re: Outbreak, Vladimir Kroskov's story

Post  Bladewind23 on 26th July 2010, 7:03 pm

I never even considered myself to have good writing potential, thanks guys.
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Re: Outbreak, Vladimir Kroskov's story

Post  ABigSoggy Wafle on 26th July 2010, 11:56 pm

Keep writing. Your writing is exceptional and you can only get better from here.

The only criticism I can give (due to the fact that I am not a very good writer) is to try and build up some more intensity. I am not trying to belittle your story in any sense, however. If you get the time, read some of this online story. Its a good read and maybe you can find some inspiration or ideas out of it. I personally think it has some great intense action and it builds up to all of it nicely. Like I said though, your story is amazing. You don't really have to change anything at all.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3110270/1/The_End
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Re: Outbreak, Vladimir Kroskov's story

Post  Bladewind23 on 27th July 2010, 12:34 am

Episode 2 is very likely to be better.

Seeing as I never planned an Episode 2 until I got all this publicity, lol!
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like story

Post  killadancer on 27th July 2010, 2:09 am

id like in episode 2 to have hapiness island as like the zombies heart and that vladimir has to like stab it or something to stop the infection from reaching out Cool
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Re: Outbreak, Vladimir Kroskov's story

Post  Bladewind23 on 27th July 2010, 4:05 pm

I've already said that I don't take ideas, sorry.
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okey dokey

Post  killadancer on 27th July 2010, 5:10 pm

ok thats cool with me just a thought
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Re: Outbreak, Vladimir Kroskov's story

Post  RedrumSalad on 27th July 2010, 6:23 pm

Made in Finland wrote:
RedrumSalad wrote:
Bladewind23 wrote:
To Be Continued.

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Oh, would have you preferred "The End"?

no, i just hate it when i'm reading/watching something really good and i get into it, then the last page/minute of the story/show/movie is To Be Continued
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Re: Outbreak, Vladimir Kroskov's story

Post  Bladewind23 on 27th July 2010, 8:16 pm

TO BE CONTINUED
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Re: Outbreak, Vladimir Kroskov's story

Post  RedrumSalad on 27th July 2010, 8:45 pm

Bladewind23 wrote:TO BE CONTINUED

NO! Continue naow! Do not stopz believin' in teh writinz!!!
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Re: Outbreak, Vladimir Kroskov's story

Post  Bladewind23 on 28th July 2010, 12:00 am

You're going to have to wait like everyone else... I'll start writing on it when I get some ideas and find the time.
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Re: Outbreak, Vladimir Kroskov's story

Post  RedrumSalad on 28th July 2010, 7:13 pm

fine....damn
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