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Post  BoomerSooner742 on 24th February 2010, 12:33 am

Hey everybody might be making a military type story ( not wastelandic) and I am going to make it about a regular squad in the army so everyone that wants to be part of it make a character.

Side-note: I am thinking about discontinuing my other story " WAR " it just isn't going that well.

This is all the info i will need.

Name:

Nickname:

Personality:

Worries: top worries about the infection.

Any other stuff you would like to add.

P.S: All characters will not be added so probably the first ones will be picked. Some will be part of the story just not in the squad. You can not pick your position.

The Leader of the squad will be voted on. You have 2-3 days to add your character.
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Re: New Story

Post  SiwyCK on 24th February 2010, 12:36 am

if u wanna make a new story just add Ivan into it
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Re: New Story

Post  Dexta117 on 24th February 2010, 12:44 am

i want to move DJ into this story and seeing hes already in the army with a rank and everything i think it can work.
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Re: New Story

Post  eaustinn36 on 24th February 2010, 1:11 am

Use the one I created under "the war characters." It was never used in that story (mostly because I posted it late Sad ) but it should fit in fairly well to the new story. Smile
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Re: New Story

Post  BoomerSooner742 on 24th February 2010, 8:04 pm

Well just aste and copied it and kinda change some of it up cause they have to be in the army. Ivan was not in the army. Make another American.
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Re: New Story

Post  SiwyCK on 24th February 2010, 8:40 pm

Name: David

NickName: David

Look: White, Dark Blond Hair, 6' 2" , Slim Body Type.

Personality: Always fallow the orders, make he's decisions carefully. Strong mentally, almost never fall in panic. Speak Russian as well as English.
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Re: New Story

Post  BoomerSooner742 on 24th February 2010, 11:02 pm

K starting a list off squad members.

*David Waltalsky
*Daniel Johnson


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Post  Dexta117 on 24th February 2010, 11:27 pm

Name: Daniel Johnson

Nickname: DJ

Description: 6ft, Brown hair, Blue eyes, Athletic build, Scar on right eye
Habits: Constantly on edge (looking around, checking every corner)

Personality: If needed to can be a strong leader, Careful not to rush into things without having a plan.
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Re: New Story

Post  BoomerSooner742 on 25th February 2010, 12:01 am

We need more characters!
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Re: New Story

Post  Bornkillajazzman on 26th February 2010, 12:41 am

Name: Jamal Antonio Jones

Nickname: "Jazz"

Physical description: height 6''2, weight 217 lbs, black hair, brown eyes,
dark skin, muscular,

Age: 33

Personality: Well listener, rough type - likes hand to hand combat,

Worries: Really didnt worry much about it because he was an only child
and lived with mom until enlisted into the military.
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Post  eaustinn36 on 26th February 2010, 11:08 pm

Name: Karl Bernhart

Nickname: Karl

Age: 35

Friends: Were all killed in the past. Doesn't trust anyone anymore.

Description: 6' 4", Jet black hair, blue eyes, muscular build.

Habits: Loves to exercise and work out to build muscle. Always trying to get stronger so he can do better on the job. Pushes himself to the limit.

Job: Police Officer - a strict cop that can handle even the most hardened criminals. Used to be in the army before he realized that the biggest problems aren't overseas, but right on the homefront.

Problem: Gets too "trigger happy" when in a stressful situation on the job. Has accidentally killed one of his friends a few years ago.

History - has grown up in a rough neighborhood. Ever since his father was killed in a drive-by shooting on his family's house (when he was 14 yrs old), he had a strong interest in law enforcement. Became an officer when he was 22, and has been serving since. A gun in his face rarely scares him, but he knows when to retreat. There is not a criminal he has encountered that he couldn't handle.
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Re: New Story

Post  Bornkillajazzman on 27th February 2010, 1:25 am

eaustinn I think you should take jobs off because we are in some squad in the military.
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New Story

Post  beedz101 on 27th February 2010, 10:23 pm

Name:Elliot Beedham

Nickname:Mad Hatter

Looks:Black Hair, Brown Eyes, average body build

Personality:paint ball champion 2 years running and also very energetic dose park our/free running. Kinder smart and also a cocky twat just a student who is training in public service and only knows some fire arms like hand gun and Uzi he has bin know to run with the Angles Of Death biker gang altho never bin court and hes never short of booty calls some reason obsessed with the top hat he wears.

Worries:No Women Left and what happens after we kill the infection if we kill it


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Re: New Story

Post  eaustinn36 on 27th February 2010, 10:30 pm

-Bornkillajazzman- wrote:eaustinn I think you should take jobs off because we are in some squad in the military.

The jobs part refers to "past jobs". It sort of provides a background history of the character, and how he came to join the military. His "job" is in the military now (as you said).
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my story

Post  devilmaydie123 on 28th February 2010, 1:53 am

name: dante
age: 27
home: liberty city well... before the infection

story: after fighting in the war with ghost roach and soap i soon retired and went to liberty city ive been there for 5 years but then..one day i wake up n the night i see blood all over the street i then went to go see what happend but i just so a trial of blood.... i then followed it and it led to some guy eating the flesh of another that thing didnt see me untill got all the wepons i could including the p90 silenced light macine gun then after that i tried to get my brother but he got on the last rescue plane i then went looking for people who where not infected but all i saw was more of them charging at me so i found a plae stocked with ammo and wepons and also a radio i can use to get a rescue team with but i still cant find anybody and im still waiting for people....i cant find anybody....if anybody is reading this... help.....im in a house in the city i at star junction......help....anybody... (by the way i only have the ballad of gay tony and lost and dammned}

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New story

Post  MajorBandit007 on 28th February 2010, 2:03 am

Name:Dylan Lotz

Nickname:Dyl

Personality:Rough and tough, bad additude

Worries: ever since the infection started theres been an adrinaline to kill everything in sight ive been looking for other surviviours for 2 days now, starting to loose hope i heard there was a chopper coming for people but havent seen or heard it yet right now im camping out in the liberty city grand hotel......surprisingly alot of people left guns in there.

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Re: New Story

Post  BoomerSooner742 on 1st March 2010, 12:51 am

Members:

Davis Waltalsky - 24
Daniel Johnson - 25
Jamal " Jazz " Antonio Jones - 33
Karl Bernhart - 35
Dylan Lotz - 29

All other entries are just non-realistic sorry.
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Re: New Story

Post  SiwyCK on 1st March 2010, 2:56 am

Its David, not Davis =p
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Post  BoomerSooner742 on 1st March 2010, 10:25 pm

i know , sorry Embarassed
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Re: New Story

Post  ABigSoggy Wafle on 1st March 2010, 10:40 pm

Name: Thomas Bateman (fuck creativity)
Age: 15
Appearance: White/cauc., fairly stocky, 5'6'', about 190 lbs.
Bio: Pacifist and has minimal experiance with firearms but has fired a gun before for training. Archery is a bit of strong point where as melee weapons are not so much. He has heart but, doesn't always show it. Since the attack and lost off his family and friends, he has been traumatized and seeks loving attention.


If you want someone older than...


Name: Mark Furteshi
Age: 35
Appearance: Above average built, Cauc. with a heavy tan, tall 6'2'', about 180 lbs
Bio: He has a strong Italian background and he worked part time with his father at an auto-repair shop. He lives by the shore and goes to the gym after work and then the beach. His blond spiked hair and overly tanned body gives him the feel of a generic Guido. His attitude is different. He isn't self coincided and just wants to look good. He has gotten into fights and used to do a little bit of MMA but, quite due to his lack of skill and determination. He plays airsoft regularly when he isn't at the beach and works well under pressure. His downsides are, from time to time, feeling that his life is above everyone else's. It is more of a parent raised thing than a society thing. He is also not very handy with building barricades or anything of the sort from scratch. He can be dependable and, for the most part, caring of others around him.
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Re: New Story

Post  liltone97126 on 1st March 2010, 11:50 pm

Name: Omar Amaru
Age: 17
Nationality: African American
Occupation: Student

Omar Amaru is an Athletic Student who attended the Liberty City High School (LCHS).
He is a basketball player and was at a basketball game when a sick strange man walked on to the court and attacked one of his fellow teamates. Omar ran away and was suprised to see the whole city in chaos and people seemed to try to bite each other. He ran to his Moms house with a note on the door. "Dear Omar, I am going to New York where it is safe i hope you can understand why i left, Love Mom." With a look of disgust he packed a bag of clothes and was on his way. He ran through the chaos with fear dripping off of his worried face. He ran into an abandoned hotel room where he was suprised to find a 9mm pistol and a Shotgun next to it. He searched the room and found a dead cop and a women eating at his stomach. He slowly backed away as she approached . He ran into the living room and grabbed the shotgun blowing her brains out of her mangled head. Omar a wondering soul desperate for survivors clutches his new bestfriend in his palms and has his trigger finger ready.
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Re: New Story

Post  BoomerSooner742 on 2nd March 2010, 12:17 am

Members:

Davis Waltalsky - 24
Daniel Johnson - 25
Jamal " Jazz " Antonio Jones - 33
Karl Bernhart - 35
Dylan Lotz - 29

Civilians:

Thomas Bateman - 15
Omar Amaru - 17

Other Military [ affiliation ]

Mark Futeshi - 35 - National Guard
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