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Post  Bladewind23 12th April 2010, 1:12 am

Character Name: Vladimir Kroskov
Age: 23

Class: Watchman/Lookout

Archetype: Enforcer

Equipment: Vladimir Kroskov 2gubara Vladimir Kroskov Arv48

Abilities: None

Alignment: Lawful Neutral

Back story: Born and raised in Vladivostok, Russia. He was taken in as a crewmember of a VLCC Supertanker (oil tanker), Vladimir was noticeably interested in guns, but did not have the sustained accuracy for scoped weapons. After making enough money, he found his way to a gun club and got his hands on an AR, the ironsights proved more suitable to him and he could hit targets accurate enough for long range fire. Although still not the best shot he decided to stay with what worked. Vladimir stored the weapon in secrecy in his quarters on the ship, and finally, on a delivery to LC, the infection had already started, killing many of the crew and forcing Vladimir into the city.


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Post  DeadApe 12th April 2010, 5:14 pm

I like the character but its overpowered.

You have it labeled as support, but it starts off with an m4 so its actually an enforcer.

You have tear gas as an ability, just be sure you know how to use that. Also Im not sure you know exactly what handcuffs do. Also Im not sure why an oilrig worker has an m4, tear gas, and handcuffs. This doesn't make sense.

Your climbing ability doesn't work.

Your ability to drive civilian vehicles is fitting for a support class (which so far this is not,) but if you tailored your class to be support by getting rid of its combat effectiveness, this ability is still overpowered. Check out the mechanic in the "Best Class" thread, that is the accepted "driving" ability. Every 2 hours is too short of a time period. I think a more acceptable ability would be to be able to use cars whenever you want to barricade (NOT TO DRIVE!) but once again you would have to be a support class.


Hope this helps.
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Post  Bladewind23 12th April 2010, 5:32 pm

bump, please revise again if you dont mind, i have fixed many things


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Post  DeadApe 12th April 2010, 5:41 pm

The class is now acceptable. However if you want him to be at high altitudes, why not just make him a sniper? It depends I guess on how good you are at sniping, I can probably do better with an assault rifle than a sniper rifle, I think the GTA sniper sucks.

EDIT: The oil worker part was just the story of how he got there.. i wasnt exactly saying what he specialised in..

Well even if he specializes in, lets say marksmanship, that doesn't mean hes going to be carrying an M4 around, especially with his coming to America as a crewmember on an oil rig. If hes good at marksmanship or shot rifles back in his home country or w.e, than that would mean that he can "UNLOCK" an assault rifle, he wouldn't start with one.

Sorry I'm being tough on it, like I said the class is fine, I'm a fan of realism though and I do this to all the classes.

And to answer your question, enforcers do not have abilities for the most part. Tear gas is an acceptable ability for an enforcer, but it wouldn't make sense to have in your class.
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Post  Bladewind23 12th April 2010, 5:43 pm

im going to edit it one more time to make it more understandable


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Post  Bladewind23 12th April 2010, 5:49 pm

and.. done


oh yeah and i DO suck at sniping


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Post  DeadApe 12th April 2010, 5:49 pm

Lol seems like a long way to go to start off with an assault rifle. But its fine with me, cya at 6:30.
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Post  Bladewind23 12th April 2010, 5:51 pm

im not a person to bend the rules but its honestly the only gun in the game i dont suck with Neutral but yeah see yah then! What a Face
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