Latest topics
News Feed
Vladimir Kroskov
2 posters
Undead-Xbox :: Games :: GTA Custom Games :: My Character
Page 1 of 1
Vladimir Kroskov
Character Name: Vladimir Kroskov
Age: 23
Class: Watchman/Lookout
Archetype: Enforcer
Equipment:
Abilities: None
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Back story: Born and raised in Vladivostok, Russia. He was taken in as a crewmember of a VLCC Supertanker (oil tanker), Vladimir was noticeably interested in guns, but did not have the sustained accuracy for scoped weapons. After making enough money, he found his way to a gun club and got his hands on an AR, the ironsights proved more suitable to him and he could hit targets accurate enough for long range fire. Although still not the best shot he decided to stay with what worked. Vladimir stored the weapon in secrecy in his quarters on the ship, and finally, on a delivery to LC, the infection had already started, killing many of the crew and forcing Vladimir into the city.
Age: 23
Class: Watchman/Lookout
Archetype: Enforcer
Equipment:
Abilities: None
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Back story: Born and raised in Vladivostok, Russia. He was taken in as a crewmember of a VLCC Supertanker (oil tanker), Vladimir was noticeably interested in guns, but did not have the sustained accuracy for scoped weapons. After making enough money, he found his way to a gun club and got his hands on an AR, the ironsights proved more suitable to him and he could hit targets accurate enough for long range fire. Although still not the best shot he decided to stay with what worked. Vladimir stored the weapon in secrecy in his quarters on the ship, and finally, on a delivery to LC, the infection had already started, killing many of the crew and forcing Vladimir into the city.
Last edited by Bladewind23 on 13th April 2010, 12:38 am; edited 11 times in total
Bladewind23- WarWolf1
- Posts : 1159
Re: Vladimir Kroskov
I like the character but its overpowered.
You have it labeled as support, but it starts off with an m4 so its actually an enforcer.
You have tear gas as an ability, just be sure you know how to use that. Also Im not sure you know exactly what handcuffs do. Also Im not sure why an oilrig worker has an m4, tear gas, and handcuffs. This doesn't make sense.
Your climbing ability doesn't work.
Your ability to drive civilian vehicles is fitting for a support class (which so far this is not,) but if you tailored your class to be support by getting rid of its combat effectiveness, this ability is still overpowered. Check out the mechanic in the "Best Class" thread, that is the accepted "driving" ability. Every 2 hours is too short of a time period. I think a more acceptable ability would be to be able to use cars whenever you want to barricade (NOT TO DRIVE!) but once again you would have to be a support class.
Hope this helps.
You have it labeled as support, but it starts off with an m4 so its actually an enforcer.
You have tear gas as an ability, just be sure you know how to use that. Also Im not sure you know exactly what handcuffs do. Also Im not sure why an oilrig worker has an m4, tear gas, and handcuffs. This doesn't make sense.
Your climbing ability doesn't work.
Your ability to drive civilian vehicles is fitting for a support class (which so far this is not,) but if you tailored your class to be support by getting rid of its combat effectiveness, this ability is still overpowered. Check out the mechanic in the "Best Class" thread, that is the accepted "driving" ability. Every 2 hours is too short of a time period. I think a more acceptable ability would be to be able to use cars whenever you want to barricade (NOT TO DRIVE!) but once again you would have to be a support class.
Hope this helps.
DeadApe- Master
- Posts : 6353
Re: Vladimir Kroskov
bump, please revise again if you dont mind, i have fixed many things
Last edited by Bladewind23 on 12th April 2010, 5:54 pm; edited 1 time in total
Bladewind23- WarWolf1
- Posts : 1159
Re: Vladimir Kroskov
The class is now acceptable. However if you want him to be at high altitudes, why not just make him a sniper? It depends I guess on how good you are at sniping, I can probably do better with an assault rifle than a sniper rifle, I think the GTA sniper sucks.
Well even if he specializes in, lets say marksmanship, that doesn't mean hes going to be carrying an M4 around, especially with his coming to America as a crewmember on an oil rig. If hes good at marksmanship or shot rifles back in his home country or w.e, than that would mean that he can "UNLOCK" an assault rifle, he wouldn't start with one.
Sorry I'm being tough on it, like I said the class is fine, I'm a fan of realism though and I do this to all the classes.
And to answer your question, enforcers do not have abilities for the most part. Tear gas is an acceptable ability for an enforcer, but it wouldn't make sense to have in your class.
EDIT: The oil worker part was just the story of how he got there.. i wasnt exactly saying what he specialised in..
Well even if he specializes in, lets say marksmanship, that doesn't mean hes going to be carrying an M4 around, especially with his coming to America as a crewmember on an oil rig. If hes good at marksmanship or shot rifles back in his home country or w.e, than that would mean that he can "UNLOCK" an assault rifle, he wouldn't start with one.
Sorry I'm being tough on it, like I said the class is fine, I'm a fan of realism though and I do this to all the classes.
And to answer your question, enforcers do not have abilities for the most part. Tear gas is an acceptable ability for an enforcer, but it wouldn't make sense to have in your class.
DeadApe- Master
- Posts : 6353
Re: Vladimir Kroskov
im going to edit it one more time to make it more understandable
Last edited by Bladewind23 on 12th April 2010, 5:54 pm; edited 1 time in total
Bladewind23- WarWolf1
- Posts : 1159
Re: Vladimir Kroskov
and.. done
oh yeah and i DO suck at sniping
oh yeah and i DO suck at sniping
Last edited by Bladewind23 on 12th April 2010, 5:53 pm; edited 2 times in total
Bladewind23- WarWolf1
- Posts : 1159
Re: Vladimir Kroskov
Lol seems like a long way to go to start off with an assault rifle. But its fine with me, cya at 6:30.
DeadApe- Master
- Posts : 6353
Re: Vladimir Kroskov
im not a person to bend the rules but its honestly the only gun in the game i dont suck with but yeah see yah then!
Bladewind23- WarWolf1
- Posts : 1159
Undead-Xbox :: Games :: GTA Custom Games :: My Character
Page 1 of 1
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
23rd February 2014, 7:04 pm by eaustinn36
» Eaustinn's Xbox360 Minecraft Server - General Rules / Information
5th November 2013, 8:19 pm by eaustinn36
» Eaustinn's Guide to a better RP (GTA)
5th November 2013, 7:57 pm by eaustinn36
» Posting will be disabled April 15th 2013
2nd November 2013, 1:09 am by eaustinn36
» Brace for it...
14th April 2013, 6:06 pm by Made in Finland
» Day-z official topic
14th April 2013, 2:11 pm by eaustinn36
» Flask & the Quack Crew play browser games!
4th April 2013, 2:44 pm by Meatshield718
» E-HOLE LAUNCHING MIDNIGHT!
3rd April 2013, 8:53 am by KZ Powned
» The Walking Dead (General Thread)
3rd April 2013, 8:49 am by KZ Powned
» Derailed II: An off topic topic blah blah post your naked pictures here.
1st April 2013, 3:48 pm by Made in Finland
» Dead VideoGame Society (Current Game: e-hole.net)
31st March 2013, 11:33 pm by Super Mega King
» GTA 4 Zombies night?
31st March 2013, 10:01 am by snowwolf1996