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Re: Your writing capabilities...
TIME FERRET NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Best true story ever. There is no time in the chaos dimension.
Best true story ever. There is no time in the chaos dimension.
DeadApe- Master
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DeadApe wrote:TIME FERRET NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Best true story ever. There is no time in the chaos dimension.
WDF does that mean?
Pwnisher James- Cry Owes Me A Custom Title
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Re: Your writing capabilities...
read Eagle and Super's story and you'll understand
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Aaron awakes to find himself in a dark, bare, concrete walled room lit only with a single candle. Aaron's captor stands on the other side of the room sharpening a machete with a sharpening stone.
"Why hello there sleeping beauty, you have a nice nap?".
"Where the fuck am I?" Aaron asked the man angrily.
"Shshshsh quiet down we don't want to wake up your wife." The man smirks with a menacing look in his eye.
"What do you want with me?".
"I am going to show you a couple of pictures and I want you to remember what you did the day these pictures were taken." The man crosses the room with one giant stride after another until he finally reaches Aaron. The man ruffles through his pockets until finally he retrieves 5 pictures and places them on the floor in a row. The man towers over Aaron as he looks at the pictures, Aaron then notices who they are of.
"This is of my wifes class on a field trip to Rainbows End Amusement Park".
The man bends down and points to one little girl in the background talking to a clown. "Do you remember who this little girl is?" says the man with an ever growing rage in his voice.
"Thats Samantha Harris, She was a bit of a loner". says Aaron with memories pouring back into his head of that day. The man kicks Aaron in the face knocking him out for an hour.
Finally, says the man with a hastening tone in his voice.
"The little girl, Samantha, Where is she?"
"I don't know she wandered off and we couldn't find her"
"Thats not good enough" the man violently says struggling not to yell.
"I swear we looked until closing time, we did all we could" Aaron starts to realize who his captor is.
"Your Samantha's father, John, John Harris". "You know the police are going to arrest you for doing this".
"The police wont know anything" John says with a hellish look in his eye as he slowly raises the machete in his right hand and stops in the same pose a killer from a horror movie would be in. "You are the reason my daughter is missing and you will pay". Just as John starts to swing the machete towards Aaron's neck the door to the room opens and a small figure stands in the doorway, just a silhouette due to the light from behind the figure.
"Daddy whats happening?"
"Nothing baby just go get mommy and go to grandma's house" Aaron says with a horrified tone in his voice as he see's John's eye menacingly stare at his daughter.
"Excuse me" John says calmly to Aaron's daughter.
"Would you please come down here, and close the door behind you"....
"Why hello there sleeping beauty, you have a nice nap?".
"Where the fuck am I?" Aaron asked the man angrily.
"Shshshsh quiet down we don't want to wake up your wife." The man smirks with a menacing look in his eye.
"What do you want with me?".
"I am going to show you a couple of pictures and I want you to remember what you did the day these pictures were taken." The man crosses the room with one giant stride after another until he finally reaches Aaron. The man ruffles through his pockets until finally he retrieves 5 pictures and places them on the floor in a row. The man towers over Aaron as he looks at the pictures, Aaron then notices who they are of.
"This is of my wifes class on a field trip to Rainbows End Amusement Park".
The man bends down and points to one little girl in the background talking to a clown. "Do you remember who this little girl is?" says the man with an ever growing rage in his voice.
"Thats Samantha Harris, She was a bit of a loner". says Aaron with memories pouring back into his head of that day. The man kicks Aaron in the face knocking him out for an hour.
Finally, says the man with a hastening tone in his voice.
"The little girl, Samantha, Where is she?"
"I don't know she wandered off and we couldn't find her"
"Thats not good enough" the man violently says struggling not to yell.
"I swear we looked until closing time, we did all we could" Aaron starts to realize who his captor is.
"Your Samantha's father, John, John Harris". "You know the police are going to arrest you for doing this".
"The police wont know anything" John says with a hellish look in his eye as he slowly raises the machete in his right hand and stops in the same pose a killer from a horror movie would be in. "You are the reason my daughter is missing and you will pay". Just as John starts to swing the machete towards Aaron's neck the door to the room opens and a small figure stands in the doorway, just a silhouette due to the light from behind the figure.
"Daddy whats happening?"
"Nothing baby just go get mommy and go to grandma's house" Aaron says with a horrified tone in his voice as he see's John's eye menacingly stare at his daughter.
"Excuse me" John says calmly to Aaron's daughter.
"Would you please come down here, and close the door behind you"....
Dexta117- The Man of Tomorrow
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Re: Your writing capabilities...
Eric please do me a huge favor and stop this by removing all the bullshit GREENMAN created ... and once again, I am disappoint
A Groovy Tophat- A Tip Of The Hat
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Tophat 44 wrote:Erik please do me a huge favor and stop this by removing all the bullshit GREENMAN created ... and once again, I am disappoint
Very well...
I corrected your typo btw..
Re: Your writing capabilities...
... it turned into a story. That's what this thread was all about. I hate you now.eaustinn36 wrote:Tophat 44 wrote:Erik please do me a huge favor and stop this by removing all the bullshit GREENMAN created ... and once again, I am disappoint
Very well...
I corrected your typo btw..
Erik, ban Cry and DeadApe. Because apparently my word is your law since I'm just a regular user with no moderator privilidges.
Made in Finland- Definition Of Sarcasm
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It started off stupid and not relevant to the topic, so I can see why you wanted it moved (if it was a topic I made, I wouldn't want irrelevant stuff on it either), but eventually it found its way and was, in my opinion, a good continuation story.
oO Coggy Oo- Cry Owes Me A Custom Title
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It was tophat's topic to try and find writers, he didn't like where it was going. Was going to leave it, but he really wanted it moved. Nothing was deleted; it was just moved to a new topic.
I honestly don't see why anyone has a problem with it though... continue the discussion there.
@Fin - you don't need to take it to extremes to demonstrate a point I don't agree with.
I honestly don't see why anyone has a problem with it though... continue the discussion there.
@Fin - you don't need to take it to extremes to demonstrate a point I don't agree with.
Re: Your writing capabilities...
Have the writers been picked?
Dexta117- The Man of Tomorrow
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Yes, sorry i couldnt post sooner but we just decided last night on the writers
And the writers are...... COGGY, SUPER MEGA KING, EAGLEINDIA, me and james.
Congrats if you made the cut, if not we will still need other people through out this project for reasons OTHER than writing.
And the writers are...... COGGY, SUPER MEGA KING, EAGLEINDIA, me and james.
Congrats if you made the cut, if not we will still need other people through out this project for reasons OTHER than writing.
A Groovy Tophat- A Tip Of The Hat
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You've already heard my speech. Nevertheless, I'd like to thank all the people who helped make my dream a reality, good night and god bless.
oO Coggy Oo- Cry Owes Me A Custom Title
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Lol. I was thinking before and if we can't get everyone online at the same time, we could each send in different ideas for each part of the story and use the best one or something along those lines.
oO Coggy Oo- Cry Owes Me A Custom Title
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we all need to work together on it not just whos ever idea is best. ill explain more later tonight
A Groovy Tophat- A Tip Of The Hat
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Re: Your writing capabilities...
Tophat 44 wrote:EAGLEINDIA
Made in Finland- Definition Of Sarcasm
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