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Post  El Mexi Can 915 on 20th January 2010, 3:29 am

Week 2 Wed 5:57pm

  I find myself becoming a part of it everyday. This rotten hell hole aka liberty city is changing me. 
  Today I watched a young lady being eaten alive while screaming for my help and I just stood there on a burger shot rooftop staring mindlessly. I've also lost all hopes of finding a way out, but who knows the world might be in World War Z right now so it might just be safer in LC. I know its only been a week and a half but I feel like I've learned how to survive on my own here. The key is to trust no one and never be a hero, even if it means letting someone else die. Look at me, I probably sound like a cold hearted person but I was never always like this. When the outbreak 1st happened I was actually part of a small group of survivors who would risk anything for each other but after witnessing the terrible stuff these "things" did to our group, I just don't have it in me to be kind and helpful. Hell up until I found this notebook yesterday I forgot who I was.
  Well tomorrows another day in "paradise" for me so we'll see what happens, but as of now it's sleep time. 
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Post  Zombieslayer67 on 20th January 2010, 6:14 pm

Its alright, nothing special
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Post  eaustinn36 on 20th January 2010, 6:27 pm

Interesting read. Seems like reality has set in on the survivors.
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Post  ABigSoggy Wafle on 20th January 2010, 8:46 pm

Same old same old. I just don't get that much zombie literature for free, so anything is better than nothing (not to deminish your writing or anything.).
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Post  El Mexi Can 915 on 20th January 2010, 9:24 pm

Come on you guys are breaking my balls, let's here some compliments.
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Post  BLACK SNOW 13 on 20th January 2010, 9:26 pm

I not being mean but I've seen no originality anymore.

This started out good and has potential but don't make it end up like the rest.
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Post  eaustinn36 on 20th January 2010, 9:36 pm

El Mexi Can 915 wrote:Come on you guys are breaking my balls, let's here some compliments.
I complimented you!! Very Happy
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Post  ABigSoggy Wafle on 20th January 2010, 9:42 pm

El Mexi Can 915 wrote:Come on you guys are breaking my balls, let's here some compliments.

Don't look at it as something harshly against you. Use it to better yourself. I see some good writing habits you just aren't working them out. Redeam yourself in the next instalment. Take the bad with the good. Never one of them alone.
Keep writing. You should be writing for your own purposes not others. Who cares if we don't like it. As long as you enjoy it then it should make it all worth the while.
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Post  El Mexi Can 915 on 20th January 2010, 9:58 pm

@Black Snow: Theres so many zombie survival stories out there that it's really hard to be original. What I'm doing with my survivors story is making my character kind of dark and bad, he's the kind of person that would trip you if you're being chased by zombies if it meant surviving
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Post  BLACK SNOW 13 on 20th January 2010, 10:48 pm

Are you calling me fat? loljk

Umm Well now it sounds different; I'm going to watch this. DON'T DISAPPOINT ME Very Happy
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Post  El Mexi Can 915 on 20th January 2010, 10:58 pm

Yea just give me some time to write the next one.
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Post  SiwyCK on 20th January 2010, 11:12 pm

well yea, i think its a good begining, u r trying to make ur character "bad" nd i like it, bc u dont bullshit about how ur character helped other people, nd so i think its pretty orginal (black snow! Razz ) but yea, keep going, it seems really interesting =)
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